The co chairperson of the AZ Green Party said that I need to run a positive campaign and I agree. I am positive that I am the better candidate for CD2. I am positive that for CD2 that I will get more done than the previous representative. What is missing in my district is positive representation and I plan to give it, positively.
I will fight for a cleaner environment in AZ. We will not have uranium mining outside one of the Seven Wonders of the World.
I will fight for keep social security out of the hand of private companies. We don’t need any more Lincoln Thrift and I am positive about that.
I will fight to achieve a solution to the immigration problem - Once and for all. I am positive about that.
I will fight to make Arizona to be the green capitol of the world and the jobs to boot.
I will fight for affordable healthcare for everyone and lower cost of medication.
I will fight for the rights of life in the beginning and the end for all: Decisions to be kept out of the hands of insurance companies.
I will fight for the freedom of choice by the people who decision it should be.
I will fight for the rights of mankind to live the best life possible and I am positive about that.
Remember - I work for all Americans and not the chosen few. Crum for Congress. I am positive about that.
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Nice talking points / stump speech.
It even seemed to have good grammar.
Instead of "I am positve about" try "I'm positive about..." or "You can be sure of that." - something that sounds better or clearer. I am reads well, but doesn't sound good.
Read Lakoff or Luntz for more ideas.
Also try searching for Lakoff on the nets, or think progress's site - they got good stuff on word smithing.
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